The beach....

[Glygore]

took me all of about 10 minutes to write... yay....

ahem... enjoy...

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The Beach - By Glygore

sitting on the edge of the cliff,
watching the waves crash far below,
wanting my body to be hurled upon the rocks,
steady as she goes.

to be found as a bloated corpse,
bobbing on the waves,
to be found by some little kid,
innoccently as they play

knowing that just one step,
is all it takes,
i step forth
the sadness breaks.

i plumit to my bloody death,
upon shards of rock below,
the wind hurls round me,
but it feels forever slow.

even in my death,
i am mocked,
it lets the hatered sink in,
a feeling forever in distaste.

my body slams hard,
in the tangle below,
a sickening crack,
is the last ill ever know

my blood mixing with the water,
upon the glistening rocks,
the waves tear at my corpse,
knocking it to and through

finally the bloody mess,
that always was my life,
becomes dislodged,
and sinks into the unknown

people never asked,
people never cared
so now im forever forgotten,
not even a story to be told...

[Angel One]

Wow, exceptional writing gly! Very very good...
I can really relate to some of the subject matter. Its very eloquent too, nicely written, and of course a graphical description of the good bits
Nice job, post more! ;D

[gly]

so, im guessing its to ur liking then and ive met all erm.. expectations conjuried by my previous attempts at peotry?


ciao,
gly